Desti...err CELESTIC Brascot 6 (Off-Topic)

by RC , UK, Friday, November 29, 2013, 06:55 (4018 days ago) @ Claude Errera

List of mistakes:

• Getting someone external to the team to talk about the game - doesn't build that personal relationship
  
• Dressing them up in a bikini, with heels, and heavy makeup, on the veranda of a beach house - doesn't make it look like you need money
  
• No past projects that are anything like a video game - no info on lead programmer in particular
  
• Name dropping big games without explaining how they inspired the project
  
• Awkward grammar in the descriptions
  
• Super generic hero

Did I miss anything?